End of world

End of world


I was walking to school it was quiet It was like I was isolated in an abandoned world when a nuke went off but that would never happen maybe this all is just a dream I slapped myself slap ow this is definitely not a dream I got to school and there was nobody their it was as quiet as a mouse then I walked past all the


classrooms they were trashed books trone around the room desks tipped upside down Then I heard someone walking down the hall Thump Thump Thump It was the principle Mister right he's called that because of the' always right I walked up to him and asked what happened to this place he said the whole city got raided nobody is



His voice faded away with a pitch eco of horror his last words were Run go hide where no one can find you tears dripped down my face pouring onto Mr rights dead body my last hope to keep me alive then there was a sound in class 7 the Radio it was on I listened carefully it said If any survivors Repeat can you hear me the world is ending.

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THE DANGEROUS WATERS

THE DANGEROUS WATERS

Rapidly I heard waves crashing down

like a meteorite striking down at the earth from 10000

Light years away. In outer space thunder and lightning strike,
the rough water as the boat creeks silently inside was as quiet
as a mouse. outside the eye of the storm is lurking waiting for
the right time to pounce. I walked out and I felt the wind pulling
me back with power into the heart of the sea where it will strike
fear into my heart and turn dreams into nightmare crushing
children's hearts with danger. I wondered if this was a dream
but I will never know. The wind was roaring the waves were
running I heard thunder louder than anything ever heard
before I saw lighting with power like a pythons bite The heat
Raged like a lion Roaring with power and pride. the heat was so
powerful that it consumes the water and turned it to steam the

steam was dark like dark magic that could petrify people in seconds.

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Question If you were the charter what would you do.  

underwater expedition

Underwater exploration

This underwater scuba diver is exploring an underwater cave with

sunlight beaming down from the warm surface. The more he goes

down the darker and deeper it gets, not knowing what could come

up with fear and attack with danger. As the night is falling the

beams of light are fading away without the scuba diver knowing.

The sun is now down and the beams of light have faded away and

now the scuba diver is swimming smoothly back to the Sumerian

He opens the hatch but the hatch is not moving it`s fudged and then

\ he heard something move in the shallows above him. Whatever it

is it is lurking in the dark just waiting to strike his air tank is

running low and he needs more but then he remembers that he

can get air from the back of the Sumerian but that is where it is

pitch black and anything could be lurking in the dark he would

have to take a risk. I went into the pitch very slowly so nothing

could hear me I plugged my pipe into the back and waited but

then it got loose and made as much noise as an elephant would.
if it was stomping around everywhere I quickly plugged back in

my tank  and it was full again but it was too late there was a

goblin shark it approached me a quickly dodged his bite a

knew I was gone` but then a saw a cave and swam as fast as

I could.

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Feelings

Miserable sulking the girl was down gloomy

tears raining down her cheek like a river

outside in the freezing pouring down like

hale she was soaking.

Her clothes wet she just came back terrified

sulking she had been called names hurt not

just physical hurting her but inside she felt

cold and dark it was like she wanted to punch

something all she did was sit and ball tears out of her eyes.

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Question what do I need to work on.

My hair is brown like a bears fur as it blows in the air.

My eyes are a hazel brown like the rich soil

on the floor of a rainforest.

My ears are the shape of a monkey as it peels a bright yellow banana.

My jersey is grey like a wolf as it howls

in the night sky at the moon.

The lines on my hand is ink as it drips down onto the grey and black carpet.

I am as strong as a gorilla as it smashes

open a hazelnut with a grey rock.

I am as fast as a spotted leopard as it rapidly pounces through the jungle.

I am as smart as a monkey swinging

round and round.

I am as heavy as a fully blue growing raptor

as it eats on his prey.

I am as skilled as a king cobra with its venomous strategy for catching its prey.

George