Miserable sulking the girl was down gloomy
tears raining down her cheek like a river
outside in the freezing pouring down like
hale she was soaking.
Her clothes wet she just came back terrified
sulking she had been called names hurt not
just physical hurting her but inside she felt
cold and dark it was like she wanted to punch
something all she did was sit and ball tears out of her eyes.
W.A.L.T describe feelings. show don`t tell.
Question what do I need to work on.
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