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Thursday, 30 May 2019

End of world



End of world


I was walking to school it was quiet It was like I was isolated in an abandoned world when a nuke went off but that would never happen maybe this all is just a dream I slapped myself slap ow this is definitely not a dream I got to school and there was nobody their it was as quiet as a mouse then I walked past all the


classrooms they were trashed books trone around the room desks tipped upside down Then I heard someone walking down the hall Thump Thump Thump It was the principle Mister right he's called that because of the' always right I walked up to him and asked what happened to this place he said the whole city got raided nobody is



His voice faded away with a pitch eco of horror his last words were Run go hide where no one can find you tears dripped down my face pouring onto Mr rights dead body my last hope to keep me alive then there was a sound in class 7 the Radio it was on I listened carefully it said If any survivors Repeat can you hear me the world is ending.

question what do I need to work on.

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1 comment:

  1. I like how you put heaps of quality words in the story and made it seem real. I could picture the story in my mind great work.

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